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--- locations:corporeal_rift:tumultsphere [2024/04/06 01:40] – i will never save you. p0rcelain
+++ locations:corporeal_rift:tumultsphere [2024/04/06 01:44] (current) – improved some wording p0rcelain
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-The **1st sphere** of the [[shards:corporeal_rift|Corporeal Rift]]. This sphere rapidly shifts between violent climates depending on your location within the sphere itself and is largely a badland. The atmosphere and gravity is not otherwise influenced by metamagic, and can be anywhere from safe to lethal.
+The **1st sphere** of the [[shards:corporeal_rift|Corporeal Rift]]. This sphere rapidly shifts between violent climates depending on your location within the sphere itself and is largely a badlands. The atmosphere and gravity is not otherwise influenced by metamagic, and can be anywhere from safe to lethal.
 ===== Description =====
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 ==== Geography ====
-The terrain is most often rocky plateaus and cliffs, but constantly changes depending on the observer’s location within the sphere. The shape of the terrain changes, not just its other qualities.
+The terrain is most often rocky plateaus and cliffs, but constantly changes depending on the observer’s location within the sphere. The shape of the terrain changes, not just its other composition.
 ===== Demographics =====